Sitting ignored
grimacing through pain
trying to ignore back
missing so much it turns cold
hate comes from neglect
wishing you away
just for one day of peace
go, leave, you're not wanted here
you've hurt more deeply than the one you hate
life is better without you
and your love and friendship
death is pleasing, the easy way,
dealing is hard
living is harsh
go away
go away
my hate consumes
elephant in the smithsonian
3 comments:
Hm....... well, its a very interesting poem. displays emotion well.
wow! Am I missing something?
I can tell you've been through something that has brought you lots of pain. Getting your anger out through words is probably a good way to work through your feelings compared to holding it in until you explode or taking it out on something else unconnected. I have been through similar situations and can relate to how you felt writing your poem. Keep writing, you write well.
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